good imformation but think about laying it out better and put your basic knowledge down aswell
Year 8 say: the BEWARE is good, but: too many words, not bright enough - needs to be more colourful with bigger writing and more pictures. Keep the words simple. They would not stop to read it.
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good imformation but think about laying it out better and put your basic knowledge down aswell
ReplyDeleteYear 8 say: the BEWARE is good, but: too many words, not bright enough - needs to be more colourful with bigger writing and more pictures. Keep the words simple. They would not stop to read it.
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