OK, OK, to those making comments, but how about some originality? Some new ideas (your own maybe?) The first commenter said all these things - if you can't think something new up - go and have a look at someone else's work - someone that needs some comments to help them out
very informative and I like the background, but the font colour towards the top of the bullet points makes it hard to read.
ReplyDeletevery well presented just needs to have the font darker for the top bullet point because it is hard to read!
ReplyDeletewell presented but first bullet point is hard to read
ReplyDeleteOK, OK, to those making comments, but how about some originality? Some new ideas (your own maybe?) The first commenter said all these things - if you can't think something new up - go and have a look at someone else's work - someone that needs some comments to help them out
ReplyDeletei like the layout but try and use some more pictures and less writing.
ReplyDeleteuseful imformation and easy to understand but a few pictures would make it more interesting.
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